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A very nice scene and cool colors here.
First of all, i really like the POV . I can feel my eyes going to the same direction of that spacecrafts, but that light in the center are breaking this "movement". Maybe if you make the beams more narrow, it could help.
About the colors: It's a classical combination of red and blue, but with a little touch of purple, i like it. I can't see the source of the red light, maybe is coming from the planet, but is affecting the entire space in the right corner. Maybe put other light, or a nebula could help.
The starfiled is cool, simple but it's well settled.The spacecrafts are nice, the beams too.
The big planet texture is good, i don't like too much the light in it edge, maybe more work in there.
Now a part that i don't like: the citylights, they don't look like one. The closest part to the camera are very large and it's strange if we campare with the other lines.
The moon is very nice. I really like the planets in the "break apart" theme. Nice details and nice texture. The light on it is good.
My suggestions is to work more on the big planet and in the starfield
Overall, the scene have a nice history and cool combintaion with the elements.
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