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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The overall shape has a wonderfully stylized proportion to it the slim frame and melancholy face add a wonderful emotional tone to the character, the mechanical parts add intriguing and make me inquire the story behind them. The functionality and aspect of them reminds me a lot of Bubblegum Crisis androids, but in a good way (liked that style of work), taking into account that you painted it digitally I must say it turned out quite well in tone shadowing and overall appeal. While I question the likeness to above stated, in that had it a different color pallet I would have given it higher marks in originality, overall the peace strikes a good tone, and is impressive in those respects.
However, her torso is far too elongated and thin. It's almost as it she doesn't have a rib cage. Her hips however, ever thought it's a side view, seem too wide. The whole lower of of her body is not proportioned to the top. Her thigh is thicker than her waist. Her breast, while the size is fine, the shape and the way it convexes looks a little unnatural.
As for the head, the chin and forehead typically should line up. Her nostril is set a little too far from the tip of her nose. The ear is a little strangely shaped too, I'm not sure if it's how much it curves or if it's the placement of it. I really like how you drew and colored the hand though, very nice and accurate.
With the scarf coming off her back, I'm a little unsure where it's coming from. It's a very wide piece of fabric, so if it was wrapped around her neck we should be able to see it more under her chin.
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